WrappedinReflection
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 |  Subject: Ghosts of Time (Villanelle)  Tue Aug 12, 2008 2:22 am | |
| Lost in time at the end of the day,
These ghosts are haunting me, however,
They do not turn my world black and gray.
I do not turn from them in dark dismay,
Because in their pallor I am never,
Lost in time at the end of the day.
Pushing through the vortexes, I stray,
Moving blindly through this coiled endeavor,
They do not turn my world black and gray.
Along the twisted paths of life that sway,
These ghosts have never been so clever,
Lost in time at the end of the day.
Chasing these ghosts of ancient decay,
That may or may not inspire- whichever,
They do not turn my world black and gray.
In the end I will find my way,
Guided by these haunting ghosts for forever,
They do not turn my world black and gray.
Lost in time at the end of the day. |
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| | Subject: Re: Ghosts of Time (Villanelle) Tue Aug 12, 2008 3:24 pm | |
| It's very evocative.
It also has a nice lyrical quality about it that makes me imagine this song set to some etherial dreamy music.
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| | Subject: Re: Ghosts of Time (Villanelle) Wed Aug 13, 2008 12:49 am | |
| Fabulous!  I would like to hear this set to ethereal, dreamy music. Perhaps someday... Thanks so much for commenting! |
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