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 Number of posts: 2881 Age: 24 Location: In the Dark Heart of the Night, Iowa ::  More Numbers: 1818719 Registration date: 2008-08-09
 | Subject: A couple more poems Tue Aug 09, 2011 6:04 pm | |
| A couple more poems. One brand new, one a little older. Enjoy. Gazing out over waters Wide & deep & all alone Whispers from the mists at dawn Breaking through the minds, so prone Ancient wisdom & sacred needs Follow me through clovers & trees Drowning in the depths of languid dreams Knowing I cannot see what your mind sees Some days are meant for bitter screams Lost in the wind to find a soul to caress Reflections distorted, rippling through my veins Stripped now; wildly undressed Skin stained with tears Hair silken, fingers entwined To be on the edge of light & dusk Drowning in the wild depths of mind -SKC
Recycled Dream The sounds of life pooling around me Swirling around my senses In a mystic, serene reverie Into my ear It tantalizes my thoughts Alters my perception Until I no longer believe In what my dreams have told me My vision spirals into life Conjuring blue & black images Of what the sounds would look like Reaching into the night I grasp the air within my fingers It tingles my palms Caressing my flesh To a heightened sensitivity A feeling otherworldly This surreal vitality Courses through my veins Separating mind from body Becoming whole within the dissonance Stripped of everything Into the sounds I fall Silence dissipating into the nothingness Along with my cries of ecstasy As this dream spins once more -SKC |
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RedAngel star member

 Number of posts: 5152 Age: 34 Location: CT/NC: Josephine on my mind ::  More Numbers: 1673151 Registration date: 2008-11-30
 | Subject: Re: A couple more poems Fri Aug 12, 2011 2:32 pm | |
| These are really cool.  Evocative of so many visuals that they invite re-reading too, and I think that's a good thing -- art that you revisit is the best kind of art. |
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WrappedinReflection vip member

 Number of posts: 2881 Age: 24 Location: In the Dark Heart of the Night, Iowa ::  More Numbers: 1818719 Registration date: 2008-08-09
 | Subject: Re: A couple more poems Sat Aug 13, 2011 4:50 pm | |
| ^^Thanks, Red I agree about the revisiting art |
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