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    PostSubject: Sleep and Showers   Wed Oct 21, 2009 8:03 pm

    five and twenty years I could sit here in a dream
    listening to the patters of the rain on my window pane
    so many hours pass by as it beats out my lullaby

    And in this reverie I see him standing there
    no wars or wounds to show his years
    smiling from the shades and singing to the rain

    so softly I go into his arms for this night
    and lull in the vapours of the gentle showers
    and finally at peace they'll find me as if sleeping

    as my soul has left the thing there.


    Eh... I'm half asleep and it sounds good at the time. It's strange the little things that come to mind when close to sleep.
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    PostSubject: Re: Sleep and Showers   Wed Oct 21, 2009 8:21 pm

    nsanelilmunky wrote:

    so softly I go into his arms for this night
    and lull in the vapours of the gentle showers
    and finally at peace they'll find me as if sleeping


    I like this a lot, it's very Cure-esque. Beautiful!
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    PostSubject: Re: Sleep and Showers   Thu Oct 22, 2009 8:57 am

    Wow. What lovely imagery, Nsane!
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    PostSubject: Re: Sleep and Showers   Thu Oct 22, 2009 5:08 pm

    I'm adoring the first line.
    That's how I feel when I am having a euphoric moment that I don't want to end
    Very lovely indeed!
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    PostSubject: Re: Sleep and Showers   Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:44 pm

    GhostRed wrote:
    nsanelilmunky wrote:

    so softly I go into his arms for this night
    and lull in the vapours of the gentle showers
    and finally at peace they'll find me as if sleeping


    I like this a lot, it's very Cure-esque. Beautiful!


    RedAngel wrote:
    Wow. What lovely imagery, Nsane!


    WrappedinReflection wrote:
    I'm adoring the first line.
    That's how I feel when I am having a euphoric moment that I don't want to end
    Very lovely indeed!


    Danke. Heh. Maybe I should write more when half asleep?
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    PostSubject: Re: Sleep and Showers   Sun Nov 01, 2009 8:37 pm

    I'm hijacking my own thread because I don't wanna start a new one....

    Anyone here good at making dolls? I just tried making a face and it doesn't look quite right....


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    PostSubject: Re: Sleep and Showers   Mon Nov 02, 2009 2:27 am

    eh, sorry not much help there, but your poetry is great nsane!!
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    PostSubject: Re: Sleep and Showers   Mon Nov 02, 2009 6:15 pm

    Beautiful poem nsane.
    You know for some reason seeing the name of this thread I thought it was going to be a poll ,kind of like do you shower before you go to sleep or when you get up in the morning.
    And I'm sorry I don't know anything about making doll faces.

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