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WrappedinReflection
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 |  Subject: Vanquishing Loneliness with Poetry  Mon Oct 19, 2009 2:26 am | |
| Before me
This man
Of poetry
Embodied boldness
Sapphire crystalline
Fragments of fire
Engulfing the energy
Creating wonder
And joy within
Passionate soul
Igniting my own
A wind of brilliance
To pass upon my flesh
And a voice of sunlight
Dancing through the nights
-SKC
The words we speak
And the meanings we interpret
Impersonal & unfeeling
Burning chills through my mind
Leaking a trail of frost as blue as those eyes
The things we forget to mention
As part of the relationship falters
Like the skip of my heart-beat
Or lack there-of
As we bring the confusion to light
Only to remain in the dark
Upon the days of misconstrued
And loud, f**king silence
I wait for you
While I should question my actions
And my whispers upon the wind
You stare into your coffee
Threading the moments together
Only to wait for them to fall apart
The time-threader, heart-mender
Man with an infinite to-do list
I wait for you as I never thought I'd do
-SKC _________________ | The real power that controls us is the shameful, endless, consuming, destroying, unquenchable, greed for love |
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RedAngel
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| | Subject: Re: Vanquishing Loneliness with Poetry Mon Oct 19, 2009 4:41 pm | |
| ^^ Beautiful work, WIR. Each poem takes a moment and unpacks it; looks at every facet of what might otherwise be overlooked in a series of moments. |
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WrappedinReflection
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| | Subject: Re: Vanquishing Loneliness with Poetry Tue Oct 20, 2009 1:42 pm | |
| Thank you, RedAngel  _________________ | The real power that controls us is the shameful, endless, consuming, destroying, unquenchable, greed for love |
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TheDarkHippie
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| | Subject: Re: Vanquishing Loneliness with Poetry Tue Oct 20, 2009 3:06 pm | |
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WrappedinReflection
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| | Subject: Re: Vanquishing Loneliness with Poetry Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:05 pm | |
| Thank you, Hippie *smile* _________________ | The real power that controls us is the shameful, endless, consuming, destroying, unquenchable, greed for love |
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cynfullov
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| | Subject: Re: Vanquishing Loneliness with Poetry Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:37 pm | |
| They're both lovely and very good pieces WrappedinTeflection.
"The things we forget to mention"
... You give the reader a lot to think about. _________________ "For I Lie With Angels Whose Wings Are So Black They Are Blue." ((O))===[=]|ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ ZZZZZZZZZZZZ>-------------------------------------------------------------------(====@  |
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nsanelilmunky
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I like the imagery.
