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WrappedinReflection
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 |  Subject: Afraid  Mon Jun 14, 2010 3:35 am | |
| I’m afraid that if I see you again
I’ll want to fall down at your feet
Clutching your knees; digging fingernails deep
Breathing in the scent of you
As I look into your eyes
Emotions with no compromise
Hating the way it makes me feel
Vulnerable upon confession; completely surreal
The way your skin feels
Filling the empty crevices; your appeal
The sound of your voice, I crave
The hunger for you within
I only wished to stave
And mind is stronger than loneliness
A time to possess & undress
You’re dangerous, now I know
With scars, I have no need to show
With the rain upon my face
I understand my disgrace
-SKC _________________ | The real power that controls us, is the shameful, endless, consuming, destroying, unquenchable, greed for love |
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RedAngel
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| | Subject: Re: Afraid Mon Jun 14, 2010 9:56 am | |
| ^^ That's raw and beautiful. It takes guts to express feelings like those. Well done. |
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cynfullov
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| | Subject: Re: Afraid Mon Jun 14, 2010 3:29 pm | |
| I have too many thoughts and feelings.... this is so very well written. _________________ "For I Lie With Angels Whose Wings Are So Black They Are Blue." ((O))===[=]|ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ ZZZZZZZZZZZZ>-------------------------------------------------------------------(====@ |
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WrappedinReflection
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| | Subject: Re: Afraid Wed Jun 16, 2010 2:26 am | |
| Guts it did take..words that needed release. Raw & painful; yes. I am still confronting those thoughts. Still painful? Yes. _________________ | The real power that controls us, is the shameful, endless, consuming, destroying, unquenchable, greed for love |
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RedAngel
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| | Subject: Re: Afraid Wed Jun 16, 2010 9:46 am | |
| ^^ It is a step in the right direction. Some people sublimate those feelings, only to have them seep into their other relationships. Better to have them out where you can see them, than buried within.  |
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TheDarkHippie
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| | Subject: Re: Afraid Thu Jun 17, 2010 12:31 pm | |
| that's extremely well written! lovely WIR and Red is right, it's a step in the right direction |
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WrappedinReflection
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| | Subject: Re: Afraid Fri Jun 18, 2010 1:45 am | |
| Thank you, Red & Hippie I believe it's a step in the right direction, too. Any little bit of catharsis helps. _________________ | The real power that controls us, is the shameful, endless, consuming, destroying, unquenchable, greed for love |
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